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tisdag 13 november 2012

My Scary Story First draft


The Haunted House

Once upon a time there was a girl who was called Brittany and she was going to be home alone, because her mom and dad were going to a party and they should be away until after midnight, her mom said.

When they had left Brittany should watch a horror movie about a a little girl in a haunted house.
When the movie had ended she would go brush her teeth, when she was done she heard a noise coming from upstairs, so she go upstairs and looked what it was but she didn’t se anything so she went down.

After a while she heard the same noise and it came from upstairs again but she didn’t go up because she thought that is was just their cat wich had overturned a book to the floor. 
So she went to bed, but suddenly she heard a scream coming from upstairs so she went upstairs and she saw something that was glimmering and was transparent so she got scared and was shaking like a leaf and ran down the stairs and called her mom and dad but the telephone line was broken.

She was screaming uncontrollably and the ghost came down and scared her more so she picked up a baseball bat and tried to hit the ghost but the ghost just laughed and smashed her in the face so she got a bruise on her cheek. Then the ghost just started to laugh and disappeared in the mist of the night. 

So she said to her mom and dad that she had been so scared of the ghost so she wanted to move away and sell the house, but they told her not to be silly. So they didn't move away, so after a few weeks she should be home alone again and when her mom and dad came home they found her dead upstairs hanging in a rope and they never knew whether she killed herself or not.




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